Rosalinda Haston
Saturday, December 17, 2011
Feedback on my poem please :) ?
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this is a very Villanelle poem. it's perfect though the one thing i would change is in the second line instead of "Head resting on her hand" to "head resting in her hands" it's more emotional
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